This has been a long time coming. It is more of a practice in storytelling than anything else. The idea lingered with me for a very long time and I can’t surmise if I have been able to execute it properly or not. Your feedback will certainly put things in perspective. It is the final “draft” as far as the content is concerned. There may be mistakes in language and punctuation. That’s where you fellows come into play. If you like what I do, please leave a comment. You can discuss the themes touched upon in the story, point out mistakes. This is a journey, I am open to criticism for I know I must get better at this medium and fulfill the ultimate dream of writing a comprehensive novel.
Thank you to those few who have always encouraged me despite my follies and thorny disposition. Thanks to all those who are still around believing in me and those who decided to part. Thanks to those who helped me out with the terms and all :). And a very special shukriya to the one and only gulabjaman.
Here is the link to the story: